Compare the original thesis (not specific and clear enough) with the revised version (much more specific and clear): Original thesis: Although the timber wolf is a timid and gentle animal, it is being systematically exterminated. (if it's so timid and gentle, why is it being exterminated?) Revised thesis: Although the timber wolf is actually a timid and gentle animal, it is being systematically exterminated because people wrongfully believe it to be a fierce and cold_blooded killer.
Why Should Your Essay Contain a Thesis Statement? to test your ideas by distilling them into a sentence or two, to better organize and develop your argument, to provide your reader with a "guide" to your argument. In general, your thesis statement will accomplish these goals if you think of the thesis as the answer to the question your paper explores.
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