Compare the original thesis (not specific and clear enough) with the revised version (much more specific and clear): Original thesis: Although the timber wolf is a timid and gentle animal, it is being systematically exterminated. (if it's so timid and gentle, why is it being exterminated?) Revised thesis: Although the timber wolf is actually a timid and gentle animal, it is being systematically exterminated because people wrongfully believe it to be a fierce and cold_blooded killer.
Tips for Writing Your Thesis Statement. Your thesis statement should be specific _ it should cover only what you will discuss in your paper and should be supported with specific evidence, The thesis statement usually appears at the end of the first paragraph of a paper, Your topic may change as you write _ so you may need to revise your thesis statement to reflect exactly what you have discussed in the paper.
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